tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3754091321802103132.post5132520019101997821..comments2023-10-29T03:48:20.267-05:00Comments on Time and Season: I'm ba-ack!Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3754091321802103132.post-86356871206775213312009-01-27T21:55:00.000-06:002009-01-27T21:55:00.000-06:00Brenda, I got your comment on Mama Bear Gets Chatt...Brenda, I got your comment on Mama Bear Gets Chatty, regarding The 15% Club. We'd love to have you join us! If you write to me at rioosodesignsemail(at)yahoo(dot)com, I will send you all the pertinent information.<BR/><BR/>Take care,<BR/>AngieAngie Ochoahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12069770459024244958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3754091321802103132.post-6083845839166222142008-04-17T16:47:00.000-05:002008-04-17T16:47:00.000-05:00I have to admit that I was interested until I real...I have to admit that I was interested until I realized that I already know this story. Yea, I'm one of those people.<BR/><BR/>The first three paragraphs seem like a back cover writing telling about a longer story.<BR/><BR/>I was thinking about you and the tops/blouses you had asked about. Now you don't have to worry if they make you look pregnant! LOL.:)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3754091321802103132.post-59310605846347709552008-04-17T07:52:00.000-05:002008-04-17T07:52:00.000-05:00Brenda,I'm so glad that you are feeling better. I...Brenda,<BR/>I'm so glad that you are feeling better. I'm not there yet. <BR/><BR/>I love the concept of your story. My critque point would be to show us more instead of tell us. (Cliche', I know.) Put the reader into the action, into the shunning. Make us feel the dilemma as if it is happening to us.<BR/><BR/>I'll post my first page on my blog today too.Cyndi Lewishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05794693752183307243noreply@blogger.com